Love and Poetry

This is a brand new poem I just wrote. Hope you like it.
Like the first winter’s snow
You’re one of the last perfect things
This world seems to have to offer.
Pins shoved into me
And you help me pull them out,
Bricks strapped to my feet
And you cut me loose.
Nothing set in stone,
Still molding the friendship
Like an incomplete project,
But finding the supplies running thin.
Deepen the reason,
Build on the want,
Skating on thin ice
And we steer each other from the cracks.
Not the obvious love,
But only dreams can tell
Who can produce such a key
And break the shackles I bear.
Hold you while you cry
While I sob on my grief,
And together we withstand
The prolonging sunrise.
Labels: love poem

1 Comments:
Justin, I love your romantic poetry so much more than the others. Not that I don't like the others, but these are your best, I think.
This poem really seems to show the danger people put themselves in for love, even knowing the possible consequences. It shows our vulnerability to love as a whole on this planet.
<3 good job
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