Double Poetry Board

This blog is where most of my poetry and other writing ideas can be found. This board will also hold the writings and postings of my friend Ali. She writes as well and I feel she needs to get her writing exposed to the world.

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Hey what's up? I'm Justin, 21 and a senior at Seton Hall University. Majoring in Public Relations and minoring in Advertising. Hopefully getting into the Ad World when I graduate. I used to write poetry religiously, and now I write every so often. I'm constantly busy with school. I'm a soccer player, snowboarder, and used to be a track runner. This blog is the surplus of ideas that collect in my brain. I find inspiration from experiences, my family, and my friends. They all deserve all the recognition in the world. Where would I be without them?

Wednesday, February 7, 2007

These Threads

The thinnest threads,
Forming one gorgeous being lying next to me.
Tying tighter,
Melding as one like our entangled legs.
Conjoining at all of the ends,
Knotting together like the fingers on our hands.
We’re weaving the story of our lives,
Frayed threads indicating our lies.
Strong and dark,
Knitting the colors in your eyes.
We’re left with no disguise.
And now we lay here,
Watching the sun rise.
I’m begging you,
Don’t go wasting my time.
These threads are wearing thin,
Baby please, be mine.

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2 Comments:

Blogger Justin said...

Hey Ali, this is a great poem. Very visual and your adjectives really bring out what you want to say. Good job.

February 7, 2007 at 8:27 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Good post.

November 11, 2008 at 1:04 AM  

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