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This blog is where most of my poetry and other writing ideas can be found. This board will also hold the writings and postings of my friend Ali. She writes as well and I feel she needs to get her writing exposed to the world.

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Hey what's up? I'm Justin, 21 and a senior at Seton Hall University. Majoring in Public Relations and minoring in Advertising. Hopefully getting into the Ad World when I graduate. I used to write poetry religiously, and now I write every so often. I'm constantly busy with school. I'm a soccer player, snowboarder, and used to be a track runner. This blog is the surplus of ideas that collect in my brain. I find inspiration from experiences, my family, and my friends. They all deserve all the recognition in the world. Where would I be without them?

Wednesday, February 28, 2007

Testimony of an Empath

Inspired by and written in honor of myself and Justin...





The two who truely feel the joy, the happiness, the suffering and the lies.


Testimony of a Teenage Empath
And oh,
How she weeps for their painful woes.
She kneels to pray for the lost love of those,
And prays for they, the aching,
To feel the joy she rarely picks up on.
Pounding on the ground are the tears from her eyes.
Loudly she cries,
Screaming to the skies,
For her defenseless heart is breaking
From the pain she feels inside.
This curse is her gift from an entity unknown,
To feel for those around her,
Even if she’s all alone.
Sobs of suffering escape her lips
As once again she is hit
With the unending aguish.
So much pain in the world,
And oh so little to rejoice.
Though, she’ll push on
Trying to find her numbed emotions,
Yet, there’s only so much her heart can contain.

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2 Comments:

Blogger Justin said...

Ali ali ali, great work...connected with this on a very personal level...very well thought out...i like it a lot
it seems like a sequel to my Eve Condolences...i like that =]

just watch the repetitive themery like with the emotions she "rarely picks up on" in the beginning and "her numbed emotions" towards the end..try to keep them a bit closer together...but other than that

GREAT!

February 28, 2007 at 3:28 PM  
Blogger mashu said...

Superbly heartbreaking!

"This curse is her gift from an entity unknown,
To feel for those around her,
Even if she’s all alone"

Although I wud say 'this gift is her curse'....and only because she is all alone.
When we have loads of company then there is no time or inclination to empathise!


"Life is a comedy for those who think and a tragedy for those who feel"

March 9, 2007 at 5:09 AM  

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